F1马上2000了,请大家帮我看一下归国理由这样写行不行?

F1马上2000了,请大家帮我看一下归国理由这样写行不行?however, though accountants an find a job in America, I will not be more competitive than native people.这句话是加上好还是不加好呢?
谢谢大家的帮助,不胜感激!

When I gain my degree, I shall return to China, there are two reasons why I have to come back:
First, my family members are all in China, and my parents have only me their one child,
so I must come back to them after I graduate.
Secondly, China needs accountants. There are many job openings for accountants every year in China, however, though accountants an find a job in America, I will not be more competitive than native people. So only in China will I got lots of opportunities for advancement and be able to stay near my parents.
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