[学习时间]如何提高英文写作的分段能力-IELTS写作

今天来谈谈如何提高雅思写作，尤其是如何分段，以及每段中的内容结构。

雅思写作考试中的第一篇需要考生完成一篇report，一般来讲，我们需要四个段落来构成，包括：

Introduction-简介

Overview-概论

Supporting paragraph-支持段落

Supporting paragraph-支持段落
你们肯定疑问为什么没有conclusion-总结段，因为这个是一篇精简短小的文章，Overview-概论就相当于总结了所需内容。如果你需要达到8.0以上的分数，那么你可以尝试着完成一个十分出色的总结段落。
Introduction-简介次段落的作用在于，用自己语言词汇重写报告的题目(title)，推荐一下方法：

用同义词替换题目中的关键词

改变单词顺序

改变单词性质
以下题为例，雅思官方剑桥指南，第110页

我们需要重写的题目是：The following maps show the changes that have taken place in the centre of a town since 1700.
可以替换的关键词有：[maps; changes that have taken place; and centre of a town],那么一个简单替换过的题目为：The group plan displays the changes that occurred in the town centre between 1700 and now.用一句话将题目所给的信息完美的复写出来，就是这一段的精华。
Overview-概论上述地图问题的概述应包括1-2个句子，用于说明两个插图之间最明显的不同。简单来看，绿色区域，道路，停车场，酒店等都有很多变化。虽然在概述中很难提及所有这些，但我们可以看到镇上的绿地面积变小了，农田和农场没有了，房子却更多了。按照保持简单的策略，我们的概论可以写为：In general, it is obvious that the town has undergone a remarkable transformation to better accommodate a modern lifestyle.
Supporting paragraphs-支持段落由于上述示例是地图问题，我们需要考虑以下内容，并为概述段选择最明显的变化来阐述：

数量变化

尺寸变化

改变位置

保持不变

事情被替换

事情加了

事情被删除
根据地图问题所示，变化如下：

数量的变化 -  16个房屋建在底角商店的左边;右上方开发了数量众多的房屋

规模变化 - 道路得到改善和扩大;左上角的绿色区域减少了

位置改变 - 酒店扩大; Goode农场向右移动

保持不变 - 市场广场和教堂保持不变

事情被更换 - 右下角的房子被超市取代，马厩已经变成了公寓楼

事情增加 - 车道在道路上画画;交通信号灯已架设;停车场建成

删除的东西 -  Steggle农场和田地被删除
这个列表基本上包含两幅地图中所有有变化的信息，然后我们就能轻松的分开两个段落，用连接词将所有信息整合起来，例文如下：In greater detail, we can see that although the positions of all the roads have been kept constant, they have been improved and widened, with lanes being drawn and traffic lights being erected. This has caused the green area on the top-left corner to decrease and resulted in the removal of the Steggle Farm in the bottom-left corner. In the centre, both the Market Square and the church have remained identical while the hotel has been expanded, with green space being added to the area.
In the top-centre of the town, a gigantic car park has been constructed, causing the Goode Farm to be relocated towards the right. In the bottom-centre, fields were removed and two shops were added to form a row of five shops. Also, 16 houses have been built to the left of those shops. In addition, a supermarket in the bottom-right corner has replaced the house.  To the top-right side, there is a remarkable expansion of the houses and the stables have been reconstructed to become the block of flats. Green pasture was replaced.

今天用一个简单的例子简述了如何应对雅思写作考试中的report部分，希望对大家有所帮助。示例十分简单明了，但是要想灵活运用大量的练习，单词的累积是必不可少的！
祝所有考生都能取得理想的成绩！
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