雅思写作--中国学生常犯的五个错误

最普遍的现象:双谓语
1)There be 句型
There are many people agree tokeep pets at home.
There be句型中,BE动词已经是谓语了,而句中的agree又是个谓语动词。所以此句可改为:
There are many people who agree tokeep pets at home.


2) 整个句子做主语
  Environmental pollution is becoming more serious is an undeniable fact.
此句可改为: It is an undeniable fact that environmentalpollution is becoming more serious.

3) 动词做主语
   Do part-time jobs helps students to relieve their financial burden.
主语必须是名词或代词,因此,
Doing part-time jobs helps students torelieve their financial burden.


2. 无谓语
We all against all kinds of terrorist activities.
这主要是受了汉语的干扰,反对against这个词在英语中是介词
应改为:We are all against all kinds of terroristactivities.
None can negative the importanceof money
Negative是名词或形容词,也无法充当动词使用,应改为:
None can deny the importance of money.
可见大多数无谓语的句子是由词性的误解所造成的。

3. 平行结构的问题
There is a great differencebetween dinning out and to have a snack at home
Between A and B,其中,A和B在词性上必须是一致的。这种规则同样适用于听力中的某些填空题。比如某次听力考试,有这么一道题(剑桥雅思5第二套题的SECTION4):… stations contain accommodation, work areas, akitchen, a ______ and a gym.这个空格中的答案一定是名词,与 kitchen, gym是一类的事物。

4. 主谓一致的问题
To teach many children are a hard job.
不定式做主语,谓语动词一般现在时中应使用单数第三人称
To teach many children is a hardjob.

5. 逗号乱打的问题
Beijing is a beautiful city, I enjoy living here.
逗号不能连接两个句子,除非他们属于并列句,那就需要使用FANSBOY
(for, and…) 此句应改为:
Beijing is a beautiful city, so I enjoy living here.
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