我水平实在太差 请大家帮忙啊！！！

我申请MANCHESTER 已经一个月了
一点消息都没有
我想发邮件问问，
可是不会写，估计错误很多，大家帮我改改吧
Dear professor:
  Sorry to bother you.I am an applicant of the Institute for Development Policy and Management at Manchester University.I want to know if you have received my application materials.And if it is possible ,please tell me about the  stage of my application.I am looking forward to your reply.
sincerely yours
                                                               Wang Lang
                                                                     1/1/2004

My Personal Imformation:
Name: Lang  Wang
Sex:Male
Date of birth:19/05/1982
Program:Human Resource Management.