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题目：
Some people believe that a country can benefit a lot from university education. Others believe that sending a large number of young students to go to university leads to unemployment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
思路：
1. 诚然，让每个年轻人都进入大学有可能会导致失业率增加。因为更好的教育背景也带来了更高的职业预期，如高档写字楼的白领工作，稳定而体面的收入，以及长期的合同等等。但是这样的工作总是有限的，不可能吸收所有的大学生，尤其是在今天这个经济不景气的时代。结果是，大量的大学毕业生宁肯闲着，也不愿意去从事那些低层次的体力活。
2. 然而，大学教育总是能给社会带来好处。第一，它能把学生培养成有知识，有技能的职员，这提高了社会生产力。还有，大学是新科技的孵化器。举例，谷歌，雅虎，都是大学生发明的。这些新科技创造了巨型企业，它们不仅仅给人类带来了便利，也创造了很多的就业岗位。
范文（Band 9）：
Admittedly, the universal admission of every youngster into the university is likely to place the community into a risk of high unemployment, in the short run. In an age of economy declining, the shrinking number of job opportunities fails to meet ever-expanding requirements of employment of the overpopulation in university graduates. The worse thing is, young people with high-education background always have high anticipation about their future jobs, for example, bright careers in high-grade office buildings with decent salaries. In comparison, in their eyes, jobs like blue collars engaging in manual labors are viewed to be too dislikable and disgraceful to try. Therefore, they prefer to stay in unemployment rather than go into those low-level job vacancies.
However, to a large extent, I still believe it is reasonable to encourage the youth to receive university education, because which brings overall benefits to a whole society. Firstly, on the personal level, university education plays a leading role in shaping youngsters as good workers. For example, professional knowledge, technological skills, and advanced theories and cognitions acquired in the university can make a student fully competent in practical jobs, with high efficient productivity.
In addition, on the social level, universities are hatchers for new ideas and technologies that can change our lives positively. Such examples about big companies innovated in campus originally, like Yahoo, Google and Facebook created by young students of the university which had brought great convenience for human’s information searching and communication and had offered hundreds of thousands of new jobs to the public, would come to my mind, immediately.
In conclusion, it is obvious that the advantages of university education overweigh its disadvantages. Although a high expectation about job conditions among young graduates might reduce their possibility of employment, the great contributions universities make to improving the working performance of young employees, as well as to bettering our society, should never be underestimated.
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