In the past, people used to live in the same place in their life. However, it is common that now people change their place where they live several times during their life. What are the reasons for this change? Is this a positive or negative development?
本题问：与过去的人们固守一处不同的是现在的人们往往不断搬迁，那么不断搬迁住址的原因是什么，是好还是坏？这个题目属于大众话题，我们平时可能都经常在讨论，所以对多数同学来说，可能比较有话可说。
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第一段，同义改写，表达观点
In the current era, people seem to be accustomed to moving to different places for living while they might stay in a city for their lives in the past. This essay will examine the reasons for it and I believe that it is a negative trend.
第二段，讲一下工作变动和全球化的联系
To begin with, increasing population mobility may arise from globalization to some degree. It is common that currently many employees in excellent enterprises will be sent to different countries in order to open new branches. Then, these employees, if they intend to be promoted, have to follow such instructions from their superiors. Thus, it is globalization and expansion of transnational enterprises that make their employees move to new places for living and working more frequently.
第三段，讲一下追求生活质量为啥会导致搬家——
In addition, the pursuit of a better life may lead to that people change their homes. When people purchase a new house in a community, most of them have a specific purpose, such as a better air quality in the new community that can drive people who focus on environment to move. However, if the environment of the new community deteriorates after a few years, it is also understandable that people will seek and move to another community for living. In contrast, people in the past might not worry about these issues since environment was much better at that time.
第四段，讲一下邻里关系恶化及其后果
It is a negative trend for individuals to change their homes for many times since they may not have a sense of community. In the past when residents stayed in a city or a town for a long time, they were quite familiar with neighbors and it was also common for them to gather together to celebrate some festivals. However, currently, since people realize that they may move to another community in the future, they will not be eager to make friends with neighboring people. As a result, they may feel lonely since they do not belong to any community that they lived, live and will live in.
最后一段小小总结即可——
To sum up, pursing life quality and changing work places may account for why people move to new places for living. This trend may bring loneliness to people since they will lose a sense of community. |
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